Wine with lime? I have never heard of that.
I never was great with rap lyrics. I hardly ever listen to rap, which is probably why.
Well, you asked for a vote, I voted. I also am reviewing.
I can tell you that this is a smooth song, although it is really not the type of music that I would actively listen to or share with friends. I'm sure there is some game designer out there that could use this at some capacity for their next game- I wouldn't turn the sound off if that were the case and I happened to play the game.
Haha true I'm a whiner is that case :p
Thanks for you review and if you find it cool though it's not your favorite type of music it's great.
If someone uses it in his game I'll let you know :)
Those who surprise me once seem to keep doing so.
I am very flattered that you took such a keen interest in my little poem. Thanks. This sounds really good!
(I should make some lame rant about how you didn't co-author me :P)
Keep it coming!
Well, I'm not that ignorant not to co-author you, however you can only co-author someone in a flash submission. Audio submissions don't have co-authoring implemented yet. That said, I still love you. :)
A well put together metal piece. It probably could have been a bit louder (I am using speakers not headphones, 180 watts). The instruments are played well and the beat is solid. Though the song is short...cut off?
Not my best review...but there you are =]
Thanks for the compliments.And I do agree with your notion that the song is cut off.I sort of ran out of ideas and started to hate the song.So I just did a fade.I'll work on getting the volume fixed sometime later.
Thanks for another one of your reviews.
I give you credit for actually sining. Yes you are off pitch a lot, but you gave that extra effort which can be appreciated. Your voice wasn't hard to listen to either...it sure didn't subtract from the song. Sometimes your voice is really off key though and it hurts (mostly near the end).
The beats were mellow and well defined, they didn't strangle out the singing, and they didn't feel repetitive.
The lyrics are kinda bland but I will forgive you for that. Just keep working on writing interesting lyrics and it will come.
Some of the affects you use are really interesting. Good touches.
Overall not bad for a first try. Keep it up.
I really like how the sounds interact in this song, it feels so natural. There is a sort of flow to this song that is simply impressive. I especially like how the claps interact with the other sounds, almost like a cal and a reply in an old symphony.
The sound is very mellow but very lively and I feel that that's something that is hard to accomplish. It has a unique voice to it. You pull me in gently, hold me gently, but keep my ears awake and alive. Great stuff.
Thanks a lot! Real depth review right there!
And yes, I tried keeping it all natural with one crisp and bright synth to create an environment!
The beginning felt choppy and uneven. The affects used seemed to be haphazard and it actually gave me a headache. This style then continued throughout the song and my headache got worse (that isn't good).
The sounds then got repetitive, uninteresting, and unproductive. I actually think you repeat the same section for a majority of the song and that makes me -- the listener -- feel like I wasted my time.
Overall there is nothing to draw my attention and the music felt rough.
This felt like sonic music with the tempo sped way up... There was no substance to this song other that a few repetitive sections, and those sections were rather dull and uninteresting (though the affect at the beginning was interesting). To keep it short...there was nothing to hold my interest and the song wasn't easy to listen to.
I was very worried at first that you recorded this way to quietly! ...but I see that its a fade in, nice affect.
I can clearly see the inspiration here. Though your music suffers from the same problem that theirs does. There is no real energy to this music...its just sort of there. While there are high tempos and there is an energetic beat it's lost to the pure easiness of the song. Perhaps this is personal taste but that is how I feel.
Clean and easy to listen to though...not bad.
Well, thanks for reviewing ! It is much appreciated ! (Even though it took some time for me to respond)
And I get your point - even though I still feel that my song is good and I still like it :)
I tried to give it some sort of climax and variation .. but obviusly not enough.
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